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-Subject: Welcome to HCoop!
-From: HCoop Board of Directors <board@hcoop.net>
-
-The HCoop Board of Directors has voted to accept your membership application.  Welcome to our family! :-)
-
-You should now read this wiki page, which describes how we can complete your joining process:
-    http://wiki.hcoop.net/wiki/NewMember
-
-It's a good idea to read it all the way through and then follow the instructions on payment and account creation.
+Bcc: board@hcoop.net
+Subject: Welcome to HCoop!
+From: HCoop Board of Directors <board@hcoop.net>
+
+The HCoop Board of Directors has voted to accept your membership
+application.  Welcome to our family! :-)
+
+You do not have an HCoop account yet and will not be able to log in
+anywhere.  You should now read this wiki page, which describes how we
+can complete your joining process:
+
+  http://wiki.hcoop.net/MemberManual/GettingStarted/NewMember
+
+We recommend reading it all the way through and then following the
+instructions on payment and account creation.
+
+Thank you,
+HCoop
+