Revise polemical essay a bit

I really ought to just delete this since it is kind of dumb

diff --git a/Bicycle.muse b/Bicycle.muse
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+++ b/Bicycle.muse
@@ -29,14 +29,13 @@ Every mile travelled in a car eats money, pollutes the air just a
 little bit more, causes some damage to the roads, and is (I think)
 quite stressful when there is heavy traffic.
 
-Every mile travelled on a bicycle is another 100 Calories of food I
-get to eat at the end of the ride (mmm carbohydrates). I suppose my
-lungs are releasing CO_2 into the air, but perhaps this is made up by
-my bicycle causing no stress to the asphalt beneath me. Most of the
-time I find bicycling to quite relaxing; even on the 30F
-mornings. There is, naturally, some stress; usually when cars pass me
-on the left as I am signalling with my arm that I am preparing to make
-a left turn, or forcing me off of the road because I am in the center
-of the lane as we drift to a red light, or passing me when I am
-exceeding the speed limit (hills are friendly when you're going down
-them).
+Every hour travelled on a bicycle is more food I get to eat at the end
+of the ride (mmm carbohydrates). I suppose my lungs are releasing CO_2
+into the air, but perhaps this is made up by my bicycle causing no
+stress to the asphalt beneath me. Most of the time I find bicycling to
+quite relaxing; even on the 30F mornings. There is, naturally, some
+stress; usually when cars pass me on the left as I am signalling with
+my arm that I am preparing to make a left turn, or forcing me off of
+the road because I am in the center of the lane as we drift to a red
+light, or passing me when I am exceeding the speed limit (hills are
+friendly when you're going down them).