Change all instances of "Follow Mode" to "Follow mode" in docstrings and messages.

[bpt/emacs.git] / lispref / processes.texi

diff --git a/lispref/processes.texi b/lispref/processes.texi
index 76c60e9..40bec38 100644 (file)
--- a/lispref/processes.texi
+++ b/lispref/processes.texi
@@ -146,6 +146,8 @@ file name.
 
 @node Shell Arguments
 @section Shell Arguments
+@cindex arguments for shell commands
+@cindex shell command arguments
 
   Lisp programs sometimes need to run a shell and give it a command
 that contains file names that were specified by the user.  These
@@ -347,7 +349,7 @@ handler could be different from the handler chosen for the
 @var{infile} is on another remote host.  Or @code{default-directory}
 could be non-special, whereas @var{infile} is on a remote host.)
 
-If @var{buffer} has the form @code{(@var{real-destination}
+If @var{buffer} is a list of the form @code{(@var{real-destination}
 @var{error-destination})}, and @var{error-destination} names a file,
 then the same remarks as for @var{infile} apply.
 
@@ -1305,13 +1307,13 @@ The arguments @var{seconds} and @var{millisec} let you specify timeout
 periods.  The former specifies a period measured in seconds and the
 latter specifies one measured in milliseconds.  The two time periods
 thus specified are added together, and @code{accept-process-output}
-returns after that much time whether or not there has been any
+returns after that much time, whether or not there has been any
 subprocess output.
-
-The argument @var{seconds} need not be an integer.  If it is a floating
-point number, this function waits for a fractional number of seconds.
-If @var{seconds} is 0, the function accepts whatever output is
-pending but does not wait.
+  
+The argument @var{millisec} is semi-obsolete nowadays because
+@var{seconds} can be a floating point number to specify waiting a
+fractional number of seconds.  If @var{seconds} is 0, the function
+accepts whatever output is pending but does not wait.
 
 @c Emacs 22.1 feature
 If @var{process} is a process, and the argument @var{just-this-one} is
@@ -1330,7 +1332,7 @@ arrived.
 @node Sentinels
 @section Sentinels: Detecting Process Status Changes
 @cindex process sentinel
-@cindex sentinel
+@cindex sentinel (of process)
 
   A @dfn{process sentinel} is a function that is called whenever the
 associated process changes status for any reason, including signals
@@ -1626,7 +1628,7 @@ The associated value is the process filter function.
 @item :sentinel
 The associated value is the process sentinel function.
 @item :remote
-In a connection, this is the address in internal format of the remote peer.
+In a connection, the address in internal format of the remote peer.
 @item :local
 The local address, in internal format.
 @item :service
@@ -1725,7 +1727,7 @@ sets its remote peer address to @var{address}.
 @section Low-Level Network Access
 
   You can also create network connections by operating at a lower
-level that that of @code{open-network-stream}, using
+level than that of @code{open-network-stream}, using
 @code{make-network-process}.
 
 @menu
@@ -2025,7 +2027,8 @@ That particular network option is supported by
 @section Misc Network Facilities
 
   These additional functions are useful for creating and operating
-on network connections.
+on network connections.  Note that they are supported only on some
+systems.
 
 @defun network-interface-list
 This function returns a list describing the network interfaces
@@ -2064,8 +2067,9 @@ number @var{p}.  @code{format-network-address} converts that to the
 string @code{"@var{a}.@var{b}.@var{c}.@var{d}:@var{p}"}.
 
 A nine-element vector @code{[@var{a} @var{b} @var{c} @var{d} @var{e}
-@var{f} @var{g} @var{h} @var{p}]} represents an IPv6 address and port
-number.  @code{format-network-address} converts that to the string
+@var{f} @var{g} @var{h} @var{p}]} represents an IPv6 address along
+with a port number.  @code{format-network-address} converts that to
+the string
 @code{"[@var{a}:@var{b}:@var{c}:@var{d}:@var{e}:@var{f}:@var{g}:@var{h}]:@var{p}"}.
 
 If the vector does not include the port number, @var{p}, or if