Merge remote-tracking branch 'upstream/debian/sid' into feature/apt-manpage

[ntk/apt.git] / doc / offline.sgml

diff --git a/doc/offline.sgml b/doc/offline.sgml
index 99e260b..659ca31 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/offline.sgml
+++ b/doc/offline.sgml
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ by the Free Software Foundation; either version 2 of the License, or (at your
 option) any later version.
 
 <p>
-For more details, on Debian GNU/Linux systems, see the file
+For more details, on Debian systems, see the file
 /usr/share/common-licenses/GPL for the full license.
 </copyright>
 
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ no connection.
 
 <p>
 This is achieved by creatively manipulating the APT configuration file. The
-essential premis to tell APT to look on a disc for it's archive files. Note
+essential premise to tell APT to look on a disc for it's archive files. Note
 that the disc should be formated with a filesystem that can handle long file
 names such as ext2, fat32 or vfat.
 
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ configuration file in <em>/usr/share/doc/apt/examples/apt.conf</em>.
 <p>
 On the target machine the first thing to do is mount the disc and copy 
 <em>/var/lib/dpkg/status</em> to it. You will also need to create the directories
-outlined in the Overview, <em>archives/partial/</em> and <em>lists/partial/</em>
+outlined in the Overview, <em>archives/partial/</em> and <em>lists/partial/</em>.
 Then take the disc to the remote machine and configure the sources.list. 
 On the remote machine execute the following:
 
@@ -141,9 +141,9 @@ On the remote machine execute the following:
  [ APT fetches all the packages needed to upgrade the target machine ]
 </example>
 
-The dist-upgrade command can be replaced with any-other standard APT commands,
+The dist-upgrade command can be replaced with any other standard APT commands,
 particularly dselect-upgrade. You can even use an APT front end such as 
-<em>dselect</em> However this presents a problem in communicating your 
+<em>dselect</em>. However this presents a problem in communicating your 
 selections back to the local computer.
 
 <p>