From: Clinton Ebadi Date: Thu, 17 Jan 2013 07:10:54 +0000 (-0500) Subject: Copy cleanups X-Git-Url: https://git.hcoop.net/hcoop/hcoop-website.git/commitdiff_plain/2fb619719783325125ed7f7d2e242889ba079b93 Copy cleanups * Linux -> GNU/Linux * Spelling and grammar fixes, awkward phrasing changes * Another attempt at text for the index --- diff --git a/contact.shtml b/contact.shtml index cf017aa..12d3c3c 100644 --- a/contact.shtml +++ b/contact.shtml @@ -6,8 +6,12 @@ - - + @@ -32,7 +36,9 @@ - +
Chat#hcoop on Freenode   (This is an Internet Relay Chat channel where you can ask our admins questions.)Chat #hcoop on Freenode   (This is an +Internet Relay +Chat channel where you can ask other users questions or generally +chatter.)
Bugs and FixesBugs and things requiring fixes can be reported in our Bugzilla database.Bugs, things requiring fixes, and anything you are + unsure about can be reported through our bug tracker.
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The Original Internet Hosting Cooperative

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[Whatever text we put here should be catchy and highly relevant to prospective new members. I just grabbed this from the wiki for now.] We're a registered Pennsylvania (USA) non-profit corporation with HcoopBylaws that put complete control and ownership of the co-op in the hands of the members. Each member has an equal vote on issues ike electing the board of directors. The board makes all of the day-to-day decisions that control how the co-op works socially and technically.
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The Internet Hosting Cooperative

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We are an Internet hosting service and community, run +democratically as a USA 501(c)(12) non-profit corporation. HCoop +members pool their resources to support most any services that qualify +as "Internet hosting."

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+We're fans of Free Software and release all of our custom + software under Free licenses. +
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+We are cooperatively organized and not-for-profit (all revenue goes + toward improving services), adhering to the Seven + Principles. +
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