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@@ -11,11 +11,9 @@ anything from a superuser. Since we provide a generic
 Debian GNU/Linux shell, you can write and run your own
 daemons in whatever programming language you fancy.</p>
 
-<p>We support Free Software, and release all of our
-custom software <a
-href="http://wiki.hcoop.net/Code">under Free
-licenses</a>, and are committed to using only Free
-Software in our infrastructure.</p>
+<p>We support Free Software, releasing all of our custom software <a
+href="http://wiki.hcoop.net/Code">under Free licenses</a>, and using
+only Free Software for our infrastructure.</p>
 
 <p>Our <a
 href="http://wiki.hcoop.net/Hardware">servers</a> are
@@ -30,55 +28,59 @@ staff.</p>
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-  <tr><td><strong>Storage</strong></td><td> Around ten
-      gigabytes of storage. You can request more disk
-      space as needed; our quotas are only in place to
-      prevent oversubscription of storage. As we add
-      more storage, all members benefit.</td></tr>
+  <tr><td><strong>Storage</strong></td><td>Around ten gigabytes of
+      storage. You can request more disk space as needed; we have
+      quotas in place to prevent over-subscription of storage and
+      strive to grant any reasonable requests so long as we have the
+      resources for it. As we add more storage, all members
+      benefit.</td></tr>
 
   <tr><td><strong>Bandwidth</strong></td><td>We currently have a 5Mbps
   connection (<a
   href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Burstable_billing">95th
   percentile</a> billing) burstable to 100Mbps. If your sites see less
-  than a hundred or so gigabytes of traffic per months, we can
-  feasibly host you. As membership expands, we intend to get more
-  bandwidth (hopefully 100Mbps unmetered eventually).</td></tr>
+  than fifty or so gigabytes of traffic per month, we can feasibly
+  host you.</td></tr>
 
   <tr><td><strong>OpenAFS</strong></td><td>A
-      publically accessible <a
+      publicly accessible <a
         href="http://openafs.org">OpenAFS</a> cell
       (<tt>/afs/hcoop.net/</tt> the whole world
       round). This lets you access your HCoop storage as
       if it were local disk on every major operating
       system.</td></tr>
 
-  <tr><td><strong>Web
-        Hosting</strong></td><td>General web hosting with
-      Apache, featuring the usual languages (perl, php,
-      python) and databases (PostgreSQL and
-      MySQL). Unlike many providers, we'll install most
-      anything available in Debian so you can run that
-      Haskell web application with ease.</td></tr>
+  <tr><td><strong>Web Hosting</strong></td><td>General web hosting
+        with Apache, featuring the usual languages (Perl, PHP, Python)
+        and databases (PostgreSQL and MySQL). Unlike many providers,
+        we'll install most anything available in Debian so you can run
+        that Haskell web application with ease.</td></tr>
 
-  <tr><td><strong>Email</strong></td><td>Mail hosting for unlimited domains (including
-      <a href="https://webmail.hcoop.net">webmail</a>
-      through Roundcube), with the ability to create
-      virtual mailboxes for friends and family.</td></tr>
+  <tr><td><strong>Email</strong></td><td>Mail hosting for unlimited
+      domains (including <a
+      href="https://webmail.hcoop.net">webmail</a> through Roundcube,
+      IMAP, and POP3 access), with the ability to create virtual
+      mailboxes for friends and family.</td></tr>
 
-  <tr><td><strong>Mailing Lists</strong></td><td>Mailing lists through GNU Mailman.</td></tr>
+  <tr><td><strong>Mailing Lists</strong></td><td>Mailing lists through
+  GNU Mailman. Members <a
+  href="https://lists.hcoop.net/listinfo/">host lists</a> for pretty
+  much anything: volunteer organizations, Linux User Groups,
+  programming language development, even coordinating homebrewing
+  sessions.</td></tr>
 
   <tr><td><strong>Shell</strong></td><td>A shell account on a machine running Debian's
       latest stable release. We don't mind folks idling
       on Freenode, and you're free to do things like
       building software.</td></tr>
 
-  <tr><td><strong>Etc.</strong></td><td>Shared services for the benefit of all
-      members. These currently include a <a
-        href="http://git.hcoop.net">git server</a>,
-      managed <a href="http://moinmo.in/">MoinMoin</a>
-      install, and Jabber chat. We hope to offer GNU
-      Mediagoblin, Diaspora*, Gitorious, darcsweb, and
-      other services in the future.</td></tr>
+  <tr><td><strong>Etc.</strong></td><td>Volunteers host shared
+      services for the benefit of all members. These currently include
+      a <a href="http://git.hcoop.net">git server</a>, managed <a
+      href="http://moinmo.in/">MoinMoin</a> install, and Jabber
+      (<tt>you@HCOOP.NET</tt>). We hope to offer GNU Mediagoblin,
+      Diaspora*, Gitorious, darcsweb, and other services in the future
+      (or: insert your idea here).</td></tr>
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