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 Subject: Welcome to HCoop!
 From: HCoop Board of Directors <board@hcoop.net>
 
-The HCoop Board of Directors has voted to accept your membership application.
-Welcome to our family! :-)
+The HCoop Board of Directors has voted to accept your membership
+application.  Welcome to our family! :-)
+
+You should now read this wiki page, which describes how we can complete
+your joining process:
 
-You should now read this wiki page, which describes how we can complete your
-joining process:
   http://wiki2.hcoop.net/MemberManual/GettingStarted/NewMember
 
-It's a good idea to read it all the way through and then follow the instructions
-on payment and account creation.
+We recommend reading it all the way through and then following the
+instructions on payment and account creation.
+
+Thank you,
+HCoop, Inc.
+